Hi Al
For the grain bill I would suggest the following
Pale malt 55-70%, you can bring up your color a bit by using maris otter for your base malt.
Munich up to 20%, or none at all
Flaked Oats 5-18%
Flaked, and or malted Wheat 10-15%
Acid Malt to suit, keep the pH low, 5.3 is good
Crystal malt, from zero to max 5%, your percentage looks good there. (I don't use any crystal in my NEIPA's)
I use 4% biscuit in one of my favorite NEIPA's, no crystal or munich in that one.
I would mash a NEIPA at a higher temperature, 68C or 69C.
For the hops
I have a bit of a reputation for being heavy handed with the hops, but this style is largely about the flavor and the aroma of the hops.
You could delete your boil hops entirely, and reduce your boil time to 30 minutes.
You will get enough bitterness from doing a hop stand at 80C, I would use 5-8 grams per liter at 80C, should get you in the 30 IBU range.
I don't see a dry hop addition there. I would dry hop at between 8-10 grams per liter. I would be adding half at peak krausen, the other half before fermentation is finished.
I haven't used Verdant, but I understand that it is ideal for NEIPA
The other thing to consider is your water profile.
This is difficult if you don't know your starting water profile.
Of course, Brewers Friend only shows you target water profile, not your theoretical actual profile.
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@Pricelessbrewing @Yooper , I still don't get this, just sayin...)
As with any beer you need a decent amount of calcium 80-100 ppm is good.
Now it seems backwards to go heavier on Chlorides, and lighter on sulfates, but this style is about mouth feel to go with the hop flavor and aroma. I would suggest that you should go between 2:1, and 3:1 chlorides to sulfates. Following is my typical NEIPA water profile.
Hop this helps (left the E off of hope on purpose

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